Post by islaf on Jan 7, 2006 5:28:07 GMT -5
He sits down on the toilet. He peeks between his legs. He sees little pieces of poo floating around. He looks back up thinking nothing of it. AND THEN! He realises that he hasn't fecefied the loo yet. The little chunks of poo grin. They actually grin. Then they grow arms and legs and teeth and eat the toilet. Then they eat him. Haven't thought of his name yet. But they eat him anyway. The story consists of. Short sentences like this. It makes it suspenseful. (edit, I forgot the end). The end.